User talk:Telgar

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Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay. If you have any questions, or need any help please feel free to contact me on my Talk Page. Feel free to remove this welcome notice if it bothers you. --Elerneron (talk) 04:52, 13 May 2016 (CEST)

Thanks for contributing to my story Life Hacks with your entry Life Hacks/Hallomod(tod-pre)/Let July come, she's close enough in age. You did not add the category to the page, however. Please refer to the Format Rules to make sure that you keep within them. Thank you again for your entry. --Elerneron (talk) 12:12, 9 October 2017 (CEST)

Jemini

Dude! What happened? I thought you were a much better writer than the content you just pushed out in a rush here. These last couple stories certainly look like they have potential, they must have been very well formed in your head, but when it comes to the actual writing you put out it came out as very rushed, there was very little depth of character in the protagonist or demonstration of their personal internal struggles, and the sex scenes were so rushed that in most scenes you might as well say the sex took place off-screen. Granted, I've seen much worse out there, but I've seen you personally produce MUCH better so I found it a bit startling that you would write something like this. Jemini (talk) 12:17, 13 December 2017 (CET)

Ah, that makes sense. Yeah, in that case, I can certainly see why you chose these stories. They certainly do have potential. They're gonna be great once they have recieved a little touch-up from someone who actually has some real serious writing skill. I'm looking forward to what you do with this. BTW: You responded to me on my info page. I don't get an alert when you use the info page, you need to use the talk page in order to get that alert at the top of the screen. The only reason I saw it was because I am in the habit of checking the "recent changes" page. Also, you can tag one of your edits with your signature if you just put in 4 tilde "~" symbols in a row. Jemini (talk) 17:26, 13 December 2017 (CET)

Yeah, this is the second time this punishment has shown up in the story. I can easily see this punishment becoming notorious as the "indefinite diaper sex punishment" that breaks all the usual boundaries. It seems, on the face of it, less extreme and can even be used on a severe infraction, but in fact, it is the one punishment that can even extend beyond them getting pregnant and giving birth. They would still be under the diaper punishment and still have to get raped every time they want to pee, having however many rape-babies they may be impregnated with in the mean-time until they turn 18. The thing is, it's always designed to end in less than a week, it is just that there are very easily achieved provisions to extend it included. Jemini (talk) 23:15, 29 December 2017 (CET)

Ok, so, I know English is not Tod's first language, but I see you making some ESL style mistakes as well, such as using a possessive "s" for virginity (virginity's) instead of the proper pluralization of anything that ends in a y, turning the "y" into an "ies" (so, the pluralization of "virginity" would be "virginities.") Jemini (talk) 07:24, 31 December 2017 (CET)

Tod Natürlich

I'm glad your enjoying the story, and even more pleased that you're helping with it. I hadn't thought about extending the program to the rest of town, but I have no objections to do it. I really want this story to be open to all, so feel free to add any new ideas. This is actually similar to another idea someone gave about the Deacon wanting to implement the program in church's Sunday school, but I see your idea is more general.

When you say this letter would appear under the "Special" section, I'm assuming you mean the "School Special Events" section of the first quarter hub page, right? Perhaps it would fit more under the "Surprises" section of that same page, since it's not a school event.

Your addition does forces us to more clearly define the town, something that Jemini, Notsooldpervert and myself have slowly been doing, but it's far from done. For instance, so far it was implied that since Mahogany Hills is such a small town, the only school was St. Andre Truitt Academe, and so far the only children not attending would be Beatriz Moore's daughters, those that drop out for whatever reason (usually teens already 15 or older), or very small children not yet matriculated (a minority of 4 and 5 year olds). Under those conditions it makes more sense that the letter focuses on applying the program outside school, more than applying it to children not attending school.

So go ahead and create the page, may I recommend you do it here.

(I'm gonna go ahead and delete the letter from my talk page, since it's actually messing with the formatting.) --Tod Naturlich (talk) 06:31, 15 December 2017 (CET)


Just a question to satisfy my curiosity, is your pen name Telgar, Tekgar, Telger, or all of them, since I see you've write it in all three fashions in different parts of the site. At first I thought it was a typo, but it seems too deliberate for that, so I'm guessing there's a hidden meaning behind it. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 23:32, 16 December 2017 (CET)

talk

Ah, I did not know about academe being an actual word I'll try to keep that in mind. DrAlithe (talk) 14:51, 16 December 2017 (CET)

Elerneron

Xander is of Scandinavian / Anglo-Saxon ETHNICITY. His nationality is USA. It just means that the two highest contributing ethnicities that make up Xander's Lineage are Scandinavian followed by Anglo-Saxon (British). --Elerneron (talk) 22:17, 24 April 2019 (CEST)